| Crying wolves under the moonlight
Dancing spirits and a raven`s flight
Mother Moon, where are the Ages
when I was yours and the last pages were not written.An awful spawn
didn`t leave me to see my last dawn.
Mother,tell me what should I do?
Take me to the darkest side of you
Have found the mistakes we should see
They`ve made me stay.I wanted to flee
I abandoned myself to the idea of death
Since centuries my hope has been abed
Aberration, abjuration
I raven for salvation
Save me,Mother,save your child
The chime is singing my burial song
And the end is near
but I have no fear
My prayer-the last endeavour
Now I`ll slumber forever
Ïóáëèêóâàíî îò BlackCat íà 14.08.2007 @ 06:24:05
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Îòäåëè âðåìå è ãëàñóâàé çà òåêñòà.Òè ñè Àíîíèìåí. Ðåãèñòðèðàé ñå è ãëàñóâàé. |
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"Raison d`Etre" | Âõîä | 2 êîìåíòàðà (8 ìíåíèÿ) | Òúðñåíå â äèñêóñèÿ | Êîìåíòàðèòå ñà íà ïóáëèêóâàùèÿ ãè. Íèå íå ñìå îòãîâîðíè çà òÿõíîòî ñúäúðæàíèå. |
Re: Raison d`Etre îò siromah (siromah@graffiti.net) íà 15.08.2007 @ 06:04:47 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) | superb, no na kogo e tova stihotvorenie?
Balgarski li e avtora?
ste dade hubavo ako dobavish i originala |
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Re: Raison d`Etre îò oziris (rrrrrrr@abv.bg) íà 19.08.2007 @ 08:38:34 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) http://kirilvlahov.blogspot.com/ | Crying wolves under the moonlight - ìèñëÿ, ÷å íå å under. Îáÿñíè ìè çàùî ãðåøà, àêî íå ñúì ïðàâ.
Mother Moon, where are the Ages
when I was yours and the last pages - òóê îïðåäåëèòåëíèÿò ÷ëåí ðàçâàëÿ ðèòúìà, áèõ òå ïîñúâåòâàë âìåñòî the last, äà ñëîæèø all the pages
were not written.An awful spawn
didn`t leave me to see my last dawn. - ñáúðêàí ðèòúì
Have found the mistakes we should see - ììì, çëåå
I wanted to flee - äúðâåíî
I abandoned myself to the idea of death
Since centuries my hope has been abed... - îëååå, ìîëÿ òå, íåäåé
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Re: Raison d`Etre îò Esoterica (vulnerable@abv.bg) íà 20.08.2007 @ 22:50:29 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) http://www.myspace.com/cinemabizarrealas | Ne mislq 4e trqbva da te oprovergavam,no... Prystite me syrbqt :D
"Wolves are crying under the moonlight" - pyrvoto izre4enie v pesen na blackmetal grupata Lilith. Ubii me -ne znam kak se kazva,no te imat samo edin album taka ,4e ako ti e tolkova zor,shte ti e lesno da go namerish to4no tova.
"The last pages",t.e. poslednite godini ot jivota-to4no tezi,v koito se e slu4ilo nqkakvo neshtastie. Ne moje vsi4ki stranici da sa nenapisani-togava nqma da ima izobshto jivot. O.o
Spawn i dawn...i dvete sa s udvoeno "O"...ne zabelqzvam gubene na rituma.No tfa si e moe mnenie.
Kude e dyrvoto na "flee"?Da ne go pomisli za "tree"?
A za poslednoto...Kakvo da nedei-kam? |
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Re: Raison d`Etre îò oziris (rrrrrrr@abv.bg) íà 22.08.2007 @ 08:29:28 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) http://kirilvlahov.blogspot.com/ | Íå ìè ñå çàíèìàâà îñîáåíî, íî âñå ïàê ùå òè êàæà íÿêîè íåùà.
Òîâà, ÷å å ïúðâîòî èçðå÷åíèå íà íÿêàêâà ìåòàë ãðóïà èçîáùî íå çíà÷è, ÷å å ïðàâèëíî ãðàìàòè÷åñêè. Íî ïúê çíà÷è, ÷å ñè ãî èçïëàãèàòñòâàëà.
Çíàì êàêâî îçíà÷àâàò the last pages, ïðîñòî òè îáúðíàõ âíèìàíèå, ÷å òîâà ñëîâîñú÷åòàíèå èçêðèâÿâà ðèòúìà.
Òîâà, ÷å äâà ðåäà çàâúðøâàò ñ äóìè, êîèòî ñå ðèìóâàò, íå çíà÷è, ÷å ñòúïêàòà íà äâàòà ðåäà å åäíàêâà. Àìà èçîáùî.
Íå, íå ïîìèñëèõ tree - çà òîëêîâà êüîðàâ ëè ìå ìèñëèø :D ïðîñòî òè êàçàõ, ÷å çâó÷è äúðâåíî.
Íåäåé... äà ñè ìèñëèø, ÷å ùîì ïîñëåäíèòå äâà ðåäà... ïðî÷åòè òàì ïî-ãîðå, ìúðçè ìå ïàê äà ãî ïèøà.
Âïå÷àòëåíèÿòà ìè çà òåá äî òóê ñà, ÷å èçîáùî áúêåë íå ðàçáèðàø îò ñòúïêà è ðèòúì, òúé ÷å ñïðè äà ïèøåø ñòèõîâå, äîêàòî íå ñå íàó÷èø... òîâà ìîæå äà ñòàíå êàòî ïðî÷åòåø ñòîòèíà õóáàâè ñòèõîòâîðåíèÿ. Íî íÿìà äà ñòàíå â òîçè ðàçäåë, òúé êàòî òóê íÿìà è äåñåò, äà íå ãîâîðèì çà ñòî. È âñå ïàê òè ïðåïîðú÷âàì ñòèõîâåòå íà mayflowerbg è íÿêîè íà regina.
Çà â áúäåùå ùå òå ïîñúâåòâàì ïðåäè äà ïèøåø îòãîâîð íà êîìåíòàð äà ñå óâåðèø, ÷å ðàçáèðàø íàïúëíî êàêâî å ñúäúðæàíèåòî ìó. |
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