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[ äîáàâè ñúáèòèå ] | Oh, well, so be it, ìèëè ìîè (áåëè) çàé÷åòà.
Åòî âè åäíî ïðîèçâåäåíèå, ïèñàíî îò åäíî äðóãî íàèâíî çàé÷å (îáà÷å â ÌÃ) çà åäíî ïî-ãîëÿìî çàé÷å â ÅÃ.
I love you more than anything,
more than you could even think.
Without you I'm from pain already dying,
though to forget you I am trying.
I know you've heard that more than twice
and you think it is a well-fixed disguise.
But I also know you know the truth -
without you I'm a stranger lost the routå.
I imagined a life with your lack around -
where I was free of the heavy bound…
I woke up so scared I even screamed,
and I instantly forgot my dream.
I listen at the scary sounds at night,
when the pain chokes my throat so tight,
I call your lovely name and look,
and the pain then takes away the hook.
When the sun rises from the East,
I know that if it shines like you at least,
the day will be more than wonderful,
and of happiness I will be full…
Ïóáëèêóâàíî îò railleuse íà 18.09.2006 @ 21:51:21
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Îòäåëè âðåìå è ãëàñóâàé çà òåêñòà.Òè ñè Àíîíèìåí. Ðåãèñòðèðàé ñå è ãëàñóâàé. Ð å ê ë à ì àÏðîëåò èäå (ïî Ê. Õðèñòîâ) | àâòîð: arhiloh | 1308 ÷åòåíèÿ | îöåíêà 5 | ïîêàçâàíèÿ 49154 îò 125000 çàÿâåíè | [ âèæ òåêñòà ] |
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"Confession" | Âõîä | 4 êîìåíòàðà (10 ìíåíèÿ) | Òúðñåíå â äèñêóñèÿ | Êîìåíòàðèòå ñà íà ïóáëèêóâàùèÿ ãè. Íèå íå ñìå îòãîâîðíè çà òÿõíîòî ñúäúðæàíèå. |
Re: Confession îò Dandelion_Wine íà 18.09.2006 @ 22:21:12 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) | But if the sun rose from the West,
how would I this shock ingest... :)))))
Õàõà, íàäÿâàì ñå "çàé÷åòî" äà å îöåíèëî ïî äîñòîéíñòâî òâîð÷åñêèÿ íàïúí... :)
Å, èìàõ è àç öÿëà òåòðàäêà ñ ïîäîáíè "èçëèÿíèÿ" íàâðåìåòî,
àìà ïî åäíî âðåìå ÿ óíèùîæèõ â ïðèñòúï íà òâîð÷åñêà íåóäîâëåòâîðåíîñò... :)
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Re: Confession îò Bachi (bachi1980@abv.bg) íà 19.09.2006 @ 14:41:56 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) | mnogo to4no kato stih-struktura; rqdyk variant za iz4istena stihotvorna forma, slqta sys smisyla... |
Re: Confession îò oziris (rrrrrrr@abv.bg) íà 19.09.2006 @ 14:47:09 (Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) http://kirilvlahov.blogspot.com/ | Òàêà... õóáàâè îöåíêè, õóáàâè êîìåíòàðè, íàïðàâî ÷îâåê äà ëèòíå.
Åòî ñåãà, áåëè çàé÷åòà, êàê ñïîðåä ìåí áè òðÿáâàëî äà ñå ïèøå êîìåíòàð â òîçè ðàçäåë:
Âèæ ñåãà, îçèðèñ, ïîíåæå âèæäàì, ÷å ñòèõîòâîðåíèåòî òè å èñêðåíî, è (ñ ìàëêî âúîáðàæåíèå) óñïÿõ äà ñè ïðåäñòàâÿ ÷óâñòâàòà, êîèòî ñà ãî âäúõíîâèëè, ðåøèõ äà ñè èçãóáÿ îò ñêúïîöåííîòî âðåìå è äà ñåäíà äà òè íàïèøà åäèí êðåàòèâåí ;) êîìåíòàð:
Âèæäàø ìè ñå óìíî ìîì÷å, òúé ÷å ïðåäïîëàãàì íÿìà äà ñå îáèäèø àêî òè êàæà, ÷å òîâà òóê íå å íèêàêâî ñòèõîòâîðåíèå, à ïðîñòî ìèñëè, ïîäðåäåíè â (íå îñîáåíî) ðèìóâàíà ôîðìà.
Õóáàâî å, ÷å ñè ñå ñòðåìèë äà ðèìóâàø ïîñëåäíèòå ñðè÷êè, íî òîâà íå å íàé-âàæíîòî çà åäíî ñòèõîòâîðåíèå.
Çà äà íå ìå ïîìèñëèø çà çëîáåí âñåçíàéêî, áèõ èñêàë äà òè èçâàäÿ ðåäîâå, êîèòî ñïîðåä ìåí íå ñà ÷àê òîëêîâà çëå â ðèòìè÷íî îòíîøåíèå, íî ñå áîÿ, ÷å íå ìîãà äà íàïðàâÿ òîâà ñ ÷èñòà ñúâåñò.
È âñå ïàê òåçè äâà ðåäà:
"When the sun rises from the East,
I know that if it shines like you at least,"
çâó÷àò ìààëêî-îòìàëêî ïîåòè÷íî, íî, çà æàëîñò, ïúðâèÿò å ÷èñòî êëèøå.
Ïîíåæå òîâà å ÷óæä çà òåáå åçèê è ïîäîçèðàì, ÷å åäíà åäèíèöà ìîæå äà òå îòêàæå îò ïîäîáåí ðîä óïðàæíåíèÿ (êîèòî ñà ïîëåçíè çà ïî-äîáðî îâëàäÿâàíå íà åçèêà) çà â áúäåùå, ïúê è ÷åñòíî êàçàíî íå ìè õðóìâà ñ êàêâî ùå ñå çàïúëíè òîçè ðàçäåë anyway, òè ïîñòàâÿì 2 (íî äà çíàåø, ÷å èìàì äúëáîêè ðåçåðâè è äâîéêàòà å ñàìî çà ñàìî÷óâñòâèå).
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